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THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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I made a promise, and I intend to keep it!
Submitted By Sprawl on 10/12/31
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I awoke in my ship. There was no power, it was crumpled, and I was on my back, blood flowing from my wounds. It was very dark, and very hot.
 
But I had survived the blast.
 
I looked outside, and saw nothing. Just blackness. Darkness. I looked into the sky, and saw a small twinkle. Falconer had completed the evacuation. I was dizzy, and smoke crept up my nostrils. I couldn't see very well in the darkness, and I began to lose my balance. Suddenly lights flared from in front of my ship, and another forcefield extended to my own. It was a tank - but a heavily modified form of our own. There was more armour, it was a lot larger, and had fewer windows - but there were laser periscopes. A door opened, and a man beckoned for me to come towards him. I staggered onto the ground between the two crafts as my hovercraft collapsed into a pile of twisted metal behind me. I stumbled onto the side of the ship and the man pulled me in. I heard a voice.
"We have a Brit here! This is good! I love British people!" the accent was British. I looked up and saw a man with a large Dolvium rifle. He was grinning. I frowned, then passed out.
 
* * * *
 
I regained consciousness a while later, and eventually I regained my full sight and hearing. The pocket man came towards me again. He pulled me up and held out his hand.
"Pete Madissen," he said. "Engineer. But they call me Pocket Mad - for a reason..." Another man, slightly taller, equipped with a lot of rifles, a launcher, and a pistol in his hand approached. He was gruff, and firm.
"You can call me Kruncher." I nodded. There was going to be no messing with this one. I looked around. There were two others who also introduced themselves to me. The keeper of the logbook, historian, and co-pilot, Picard, was a thoughtful, wise man. But the man who fascinated me the most was Flynn. Flynn Clubbaire, known as Flyclub by the crew, was the Captain, and the main pilot. He had, in fact, designed this entire tank. He had navigated the entire circumference of Mars, and knew his way through the harsh deserts.
 
He was a remarkable man, good-spirited, kind-hearted, always positive, and the entire crew looked up to him. He described his band of brothers as just that - a brotherhood. They had been roaming Mars for a week before our Expedition. They knew not of the Great Martian War, as they had been over 100 miles away. They knew I was a soldier, and they were cautious of that. But these men were strong, and we could take out Frederiksen's men on our own. We didn't need Falconer, or Richardson, or MacDane. While they sat in their comfy chairs, discussing the situation, drinking coffee and fine wines, we would be out here, destroying the evil that was Frederiksen's army.
 
It was a new dawn.

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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
21 hours - 1,824v
Posted 2011/01/01 - 1:55 GMT
dude, please, no blood. this is not supposed to be a violent game.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/01/01 - 7:52 GMT
No offence - can we just be mature about this? People get nosebleeds and get papercuts and there's blood...
 
It just adds a bit more vigour and intrigue, and that's all. I'm not trying to make this into Rambo. I've included very little blood in my stories.
 
And at least give some feedback on the actual story, not the blood.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
20 hours - 2,223v
Posted 2011/09/17 - 14:10 GMT
Hey, I like it actually. I kinda kaughed at the part with Kruncher: "There'll be no messing with him"
 
Anyways, Good job :)
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
2 days - 8,588v
Posted 2011/09/25 - 12:51 GMT
Awesome!!!!!
 
 
I like the blood lol
 
 
yep 
 
lol
 
good work sprawl
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 8,344v
Posted 2011/09/26 - 0:45 GMT
nice story, keep up the good work and don't put me in. 
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 9,368v
Posted 2011/09/26 - 2:54 GMT
Great Story! p.s. (if its not too much trouble) could I have a part in it? :P
 
Looking forward to the next parts :)
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 9,746v
Posted 2011/09/26 - 3:19 GMT
ya'll know that sprawl left mars right?
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 9,368v
Posted 2011/09/26 - 21:41 GMT
Ummm... nooo... when did he leave? lol
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 9,746v
Posted 2011/10/01 - 2:28 GMT
loong time ago, right around when I joined
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 10,293v
Posted 2011/09/27 - 3:06 GMT
Yay! you still write these. Good job, as always.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
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Posted 2011/09/27 - 22:08 GMT
He wrote this in December 2010. We just have a lot of gravediggers.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 9,368v
Posted 2011/09/27 - 22:44 GMT
wow its been almost a year. We are some biiiiigggg grave diggers lol!
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 16:26 GMT
That's too bad....I liked the chronicles
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
5 days - 12,389v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 16:31 GMT
Beatles is leaving??!
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 16:32 GMT
Left yesterday...for ever
*sob*
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
5 days - 12,389v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 16:49 GMT
Why? And how come i was just told...?
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
4 days - 13,880v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 17:23 GMT
Panzer. STOP GRAVE DIGGING.
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 17:27 GMT
These are on my new list....I can't tell the difference on an I POD
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
3 days - 7,806v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 20:12 GMT
im cofused is this a game??????????????????  
 
and how did peaple get there names in it????????????????
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Re: THOSE THAT ROAM I: We Haven't Finished Yet
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2012/01/21 - 22:44 GMT
Ya know, there is a Q&A thread...;)
 
This is a fanfiction. People got their names in it by asking the creator to put their names in it.


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