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The battle for mars
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my first attempt at a fan fic
Submitted By WingKnight on 09/11/08
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DeathKnight was just reading the forums when there was a post about mars explorer 3.0. That's odd, thought DeathKnight, I haven't even seen 2.9 yet. nevertheless he started it up. The main screen had 1 game on it and no host game button. The game was called Battle for Mars. DeathKnight joined it. Immediately there was another screen with lots of buttons saying stuff like "join the blue squadron" or "join the gold squadron". DeathKnight thought for awhile and then joined the silver squadron. Immediately he was in a game with more players than he thought possible. There were at least 50 in the game. He noted that his buggy was silver and that he couldn't change his color. half of the players were silver, the other half were a light blue. Voices came over his speaker saying "they'll be back for more" DeathKnight asked who. A commanding voice said " the Martians, that's who". That was when DeathKnight noticed two numbers saying reinforcements and enemies. Suddenly there was a mass of UFOs heading towards the sea monster. The squadron leader started giving orders. "You ten, engage them on land, you five, get under the lava and snipe, final ten, fly around and cause havoc. Now move unless you want to get blasted by their lasers!" DeathKnight, being part of the ten that were supposed to fly, took off, he doged lasers left and right, firing as he dodged. To his right he saw a buggy get hit and to his astonishment, fall out of the sky with a trail of smoke. He immediately had a plan. "Follow me" he said. and flew off towards the volcano. Suddenly he realized that there were enemies all around them. He dodged left and right as their lasers flew at him with amazing accuracy. He reached the 'cano with five buggys. He scanned the top of the 'cano. Yes! the pit was there. He flew into it, closely followed by the enemy. He was almost at the bottom when he was hit. His engines slowed down, he retracted his wings, would he make it before he was hit again? At the very bottom, he saw another laser being fired. He started counting down to when he would be launched. 5. the laser was getting closer. 4. He could see the colors in it. 3. He began to think he wasn't going to make it. 2. It was extremely close to him. 1. It was right next to him. And blast off! He was going at 600 mph. straight up. The enemy fired at him, but he was going too fast to be hit. He deployed his wings and started flying. The nearest object was the Sky King. He flew towards it. It slowed down so he could land. There must have been a thousand buggys on it at least. The vehicles following him landed too.
 
To be continued.........
 

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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/08 - 19:14 GMT
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Posted 2009/11/08 - 21:04 GMT
wow that is really good. are you going to write more?
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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/08 - 21:29 GMT
Yes, definitely.
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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/08 - 22:09 GMT
.....um....OK, I guess.....
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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/08 - 22:43 GMT
8O wow...intense
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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/09 - 4:51 GMT
A little hard to follow, but very dramatic, and worth continuing. My compliments on an excellent first story.
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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/09 - 19:22 GMT
8-O
 
 
WOW!!
 
for a first story thats perfect!
 
 
when will it be finished?
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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/09 - 22:32 GMT
I think it's going to be weekly.
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Re: The battle for mars
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Posted 2009/11/09 - 22:33 GMT
Awesome! You've inspired ME to attempt a fan fic! This is cool for a first try, and should become a big hit on Mars!
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Posted 2010/03/01 - 2:28 GMT
BAM!!!!


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