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mars explorer the comic
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hear a new series of mars comics
Submitted By Electro on 11/07/11
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This Document originally posted in the "Mars Explorer" Group

        Hello fellow Martians, I know i haven't posted for the longest time, but I had a great idea to make a Mars Explorer comic. So, I have made the very first Mars comic. Now, just bear with me here, this is a good idea. I do admit that this strip could be better. This is where you come in, the community of Mars Explorer. All you have to do is send me a pm of your idea for a comic. Here's some guidelines you should follow before submitting.
 
-is it funny enough?
-is it somthing that can be easily understood?
 
 
                                              without and further to do here is the comic
 
mars comic #1
 
 
 
        So, I hope this comic makes sense, if not, I'm sorry. You could do one of four options. You could write a nasty comment like "get this garbage off the site", or contact a moderator and take it down, or send me a pm for a better comic idea, or stare at the screen angrily, but I hope someone likes it.
 
 

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Re: mars explorer the comic
2 days - 6,069v
Posted 2011/07/11 - 23:58 GMT
Electro,
 
As a matter of fact, I do like the Mars Explorer comic that you have put up here. I like the idea, and I do think that this has the potential to be a very successful way of "reliving" exciting dogfights and other moments on Mars.
 
Here are some suggestions (do not take these as criticism!):
 
1) Try to make the laser more directive (which vehicle shot it and which one was hit?)
2) Try to add colour to everything; not just some parts of vehicles and people
3) In your next comic (I hope there are more!) maybe try to make more of the scenes in-game, instead of in the real world. I personally think that readers would enjoy that more.
 
As I have said, these are only suggestions so please don't take them critically.
 
Now, going to the guidelines:
1) It is funny enough. I like the exaggerated action in the third frame.
2) It is quite easily understood. However, if you are making it a dream, I would suggest showing a picture of the person waking up. I would also suggest making the two "dream frames" in thought bubbles to make it clearer that it is a dream.
 
Overall, great work!
 
Apophis
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Re: mars explorer the comic
12 hours - 917v
Posted 2011/07/12 - 0:25 GMT
                                                 Apophis

Thank you for you comments. I was not sure how the community of mars was going to like this comic. I also feel obligated to answer you questions. 

1.The MLG tank was the one who shot the Lazer

2.I will try to add color it's just kind of hard to get ever single spot

3. I plan to make the comics more in game 

If you would like to help in the making of these comics that would be splendid. Also there is no option of a bubble border in the program to make the comic.  But I really wanted to add it. 
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Re: mars explorer the comic
2 days - 6,069v
Posted 2011/07/12 - 0:28 GMT
Electro,
 
I would be absolutely THRILLED to help in the making of these comics. Please just PM me with more information as to how I may be able to be of assistance.
 
Thanks, and as I have said before, looks GREAT!
 
Apophis
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Re: mars explorer the comic
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2011/07/12 - 5:25 GMT
This is a fun idea, and there is nothing wrong with having fun and being creative if it's Mars related! I know many of you may be afraid of being moderated, but if it pretty much follows under these guidelines, take a shot at it!
 
 
Eric
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Re: mars explorer the comic
54 minutes - 70v
Posted 2011/07/12 - 6:26 GMT
Not that important but @electro
 
"without and further to do here is the comic"
 
I am wondering if you meant: "without further ado" ??
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Re: mars explorer the comic
1 day - 5,338v
Posted 2011/09/02 - 4:12 GMT
Hm. . . interesting idea, but I think that the graphics should be much better. 
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Re: mars explorer the comic
4 weeks - 32,767v
Posted 2011/09/02 - 6:29 GMT
Hey, at least this is game related. I find it a thousand times more interesting and Mars-related than the club posts which are as bad as TV advertizing at this point.
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Re: mars explorer the comic
1 day - 9,357v
Posted 2011/09/02 - 19:02 GMT
:D HAHA
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Ya exactly your words
19 hours - 1,673v
Posted 2011/09/02 - 20:23 GMT
"get this garbage off the site",
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Re: Ya exactly your words
1 week - 32,767v
Posted 2011/09/02 - 22:13 GMT
If that was a joke, lol. If it wasn't, why not? This is mars-related, and as long as they are appropriate, then why not have them posted? (maybe as comments to this post) I personally have no objection to them, and I think that this could be fun. And, as kruncher said, it is WAY better than a lot of the other posts out there like the club ones.
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Re: Ya exactly your words
1 day - 9,357v
Posted 2011/09/03 - 1:19 GMT
:D
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Re: mars explorer the comic
3 days - 8,344v
Posted 2011/09/02 - 22:47 GMT
*calls flynn* FLYNN GET OVER HERE AND TAKE THIS DOWN!!!!!!!!
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Re: mars explorer the comic
6 days - 21,100v
Posted 2011/09/04 - 2:10 GMT
HAHAAHHALOLOLOL!!!!!        dang this is one of the rare post that accually makes me LAUGH OUT LOUD!!!!!      LOLOLOLOLOLOL  I REAALLLY DID I LAUGHED OUT LOUD!!  HAHAHA I DID!!  SERIOUSLY!!!  tooo funneh!
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Re: mars explorer the comic
1 day - 9,357v
Posted 2011/09/05 - 14:50 GMT
heehee :D
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Re: mars explorer the comic
5 days - 22,986v
Posted 2011/09/08 - 22:39 GMT
You should post a comic every week (using the same post, obviously)
 
 
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Re: mars explorer the comic
1 day - 9,357v
Posted 2011/09/12 - 1:52 GMT
yeah
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Re: mars explorer the comic
12 hours - 917v
Posted 2011/09/14 - 0:51 GMT
the problem with that is, I need comic ideas! If anyone out there has any just pm them to me. 
 
side note * Steampunk Mars Buggy?
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Re: mars explorer the comic
3 days - 8,344v
Posted 2011/09/14 - 1:21 GMT
the zombie buggy apocalypse
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Posted 2011/09/14 - 15:48 GMT
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